Nice!
It?s difficult to coment a walk based in only perspectiv view. I suggest you put 3: front, side and perspective views; you can joint them in one single video, so they?ll play syncronized.
Seems he rotates the shoulders (top spine) and hip in one axis only. I mean, in front view, shoulders an hip need to be rotated oposite to each other (so the spine will lead the shoulders to a "lateral bounce") to conterbalance and transmit the weight feel. This light or none weight fell in this walk , plus the way the right hand breaks at rear-end of path give a bit female/delicate feel to this walk. If it was your intention to give this characteristic to him, so it?s well done.
Keep going!
