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« on: March 19, 2009, 04:49:10 PM »
This is an update of an old study, made for Maestro animation for 11secondclub 2008 March contest, made in Max8. Still WIP, and any C&C are very welcome:

<a href="http://www.youtube.com/v/F10LBnISl-Y&amp;ap=%2526fmt%3D18&amp;rel=0" target="_blank">http://www.youtube.com/v/F10LBnISl-Y&amp;ap=%2526fmt%3D18&amp;rel=0</a>
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« Reply #1 on: March 23, 2009, 11:24:22 AM »
I like a lot the beggining untill 150 and the end after 300, in between I find that the hands are doing a bit too much the same things, moving in circle, I think it's moving too much.

other that that it's really good. I like a lot when he slaps the sheet around 100.

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« Reply #2 on: March 26, 2009, 06:34:11 AM »
Hey, Mathias! Thanks for comment. Yes, I still have this problem: I use to put too much movements in all my exercises... I?ll re-study the story at 150-300.
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