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vijaynaik
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« on: February 27, 2009, 03:36:23 PM »
Hi everyone, i m absolutely a fresher in this field.It will be really great if guys can help me out in improvising my work.Need yr critiques as well as suggestions to improvise it..I ll be waiting'



http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5V-aTZ7RFqw
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Mathias AUBRY
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« Reply #1 on: March 03, 2009, 03:50:30 PM »
hey vijanaik, really cool!!!

it's difficult to give a good comment using youtube, I prefer vimeo cuz the user can download the file and like that you can share a quicktime movie that you watch frame by frame.

anyway, it's a nice walk but there are some pop in the animation, it's like there are some frame missing...

I can't really tell where exaclty but try to smooth it a bit... no too much cuz these pops give a bit of character to your walk.

keep it up man.
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« Reply #2 on: March 08, 2009, 04:23:14 AM »
thnx for comment Mathias AUBRY i vil sure upolad it again thnx dear
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« Reply #3 on: March 08, 2009, 05:31:33 AM »
Hi, vijaynaik. I agree about the video quality, but anyway I can say that this is energetic walkcycle and therefore   should be hips-torso rotation, you can even reduce the left-right swing of the hips. Keep it up.  Cool
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« Reply #4 on: August 31, 2009, 05:50:49 AM »
Its good to show different angles of the walk also.

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