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hemant202
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« on: August 25, 2008, 01:28:41 AM »
hi,, eyeryone

  this is my first post to animation lounge... this small animation of a character jumps in water and make splash...

 critic r welcome..

<a href="http://www.youtube.com/v/IsJK0yWnzRw&amp;ap=%2526fmt%3D18&amp;rel=0" target="_blank">http://www.youtube.com/v/IsJK0yWnzRw&amp;ap=%2526fmt%3D18&amp;rel=0</a>


thanx

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« Reply #1 on: August 25, 2008, 06:15:10 AM »
Well Welcome to Animation lounge.  Its and awesome site.  And as for your jump, good job. Keep up the good work.  Hope to see lots more from you.
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« Reply #2 on: August 25, 2008, 12:52:11 PM »
hello hemant.

Welcome to animation lounge! hope you will enjoy the forum!

For your animation, it's really nice. It's a bit difficult to critic your animation because it's short and on youtube we can't really pause. If you have your animation in *.mov, on vimeo ppl can dowload it.

but to come back to your animation, the only thing I would say is that during the jump we only see one. it's good that one foot is higher than the other but then the silouhette is difficult to read during the jump.

hope it makes sens!

keep it up
Mathias.
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